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Well, as a good contrast from my sketch that I posted earlier, this now has darker lines!!! Whooo! I've also gotten to work in CS3 with coloring... Again the story will some day be up on [link]
but I've not gotten to that yet, now have I? -.-

Comments and suggestions are appreciated.

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:iconzealthoskot:
Thank you! It still has a way to go, of course

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"Uuo, the real rain of blood is so cool <3"
:icongcbillyownzme:
That's really cool! I like the jacket especially.

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"Jack! Jack! Is that spaghetti you're eating?" - Christy
:iconzealthoskot:
It's almost the only part I've actually colored XD.

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"Uuo, the real rain of blood is so cool <3"
:iconweasel-wardance:
His hair looks nice! You draw so tiny, I swear. |D When you're shading, try not to just slide up and down--use different colors, right? Like cooler colors for shadows, etc, etc. It'll make the picture seem more lively. x3

Your anatomy's improving! But try to photoreference. There's a lot a photo can tell you that I--and tutorials--can't.

However, I can give a few pointers. x3 The neck is a bit thick, and it seems you're using the jacket to hide the anatomy you're unsure of (the design is swanky, by the way, but why is it always red and black with you, haha). Those lines in the neck you're drawing are meant to represent the cartoid artery--they start behind the ears and meet at the clavicle, so that should help with positioning the neck.

The overall height looks good, though. =D

A last question: How is he supposed to lift that sword? xDD

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"He who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe is as good as dead; his eyes are closed." - Albert Einstein
:iconzealthoskot:
Uhm... That's a good question... It's a drawing. XD

Anyway, thanks for the pointers. I know how to draw an arm... And I love my red and black...

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"Uuo, the real rain of blood is so cool <3"
:iconyamiyugi-and-me:
Wow, what a cool looking character :3 I'd like to see this when its done.

I wish I had a jacket like that
:iconzealthoskot:
So would I! (and so Do I on the jacket comment)

The only thing keeping me from this drawing is my lack of a tablet. It would make life so much easier, especially on the little things like the chains and pockets and stuff on the jacket....

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"Uuo, the real rain of blood is so cool <3"
:iconyamiyugi-and-me:
Ah yes, the tablet is a wonderful thing indeed. You can get a good one for a pretty good price, under a 100 usually.

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